Pssst... Don't tell anyone yet, but the KINDLE version of 'David
Porter, Philadelphia & the Barbary Pirates' broke free and launched
itself. Something to do with the wrong
button getting pressed. Anyhoo...she's out there now, undergoing
self-imposed sea-trials...prior to a few tweaks to the rigging; relaunch
and the paperback version soon after. Check it out - a cock-up on the
chapter-heads layout on smaller screens - otherwise text looks good.
How's it read?
Friday, February 27, 2015
Wednesday, February 4, 2015
Visual Up-Date on Progress of Next Book
The Beta Readers are sending their zingers back to be mulled over, before the line-reading edit by a pro.
The current session is to ensure the cast of characters (you don't want to know) doesn't have a eye-color shift, a hair-change and new name somewhere with the 2-300 page saga.
For those who have not been paying attention, this is book Two of a planned Seven based on the epic nautical struggles of David Porter from Midshipman in America's War of Revolution against George III's henchmen, to the cusp of the break-up of the Ottoman Empire and his role as Ambassador in Constantinople.
Porter, along with 305 other American sailors, were captured, held hostage and enslaved at Tripoli in1803. Sound's familiar, eh?. All will be revealed in 'David Porter, Philadelphia & the Barbary Pirates'. If you'ver ever wondered where that line "...to the shores of Tripoli" came from, in the USMC Hymn...read the book. Out soon in Kindle and paperback.
Here's a preview of the unadorned cover as a copy of the 1803 etching - and one I goosed with with some color tinting.
Guess which one I'm going with ...
Pssst...the next book is based on events surrounding the involvement of the yacht America in the Civil War. Hope to launch her in time for the America's Cup Race in Bermuda, 2017.
The current session is to ensure the cast of characters (you don't want to know) doesn't have a eye-color shift, a hair-change and new name somewhere with the 2-300 page saga.
For those who have not been paying attention, this is book Two of a planned Seven based on the epic nautical struggles of David Porter from Midshipman in America's War of Revolution against George III's henchmen, to the cusp of the break-up of the Ottoman Empire and his role as Ambassador in Constantinople.
Porter, along with 305 other American sailors, were captured, held hostage and enslaved at Tripoli in1803. Sound's familiar, eh?. All will be revealed in 'David Porter, Philadelphia & the Barbary Pirates'. If you'ver ever wondered where that line "...to the shores of Tripoli" came from, in the USMC Hymn...read the book. Out soon in Kindle and paperback.
Here's a preview of the unadorned cover as a copy of the 1803 etching - and one I goosed with with some color tinting.
Guess which one I'm going with ...
Pssst...the next book is based on events surrounding the involvement of the yacht America in the Civil War. Hope to launch her in time for the America's Cup Race in Bermuda, 2017.
Sunday, November 16, 2014
A Memorable Date For Me Marks A Remarkable Review for Midshipman David Porter
Was most happy to receive this '
gift' on my birthday, Nov. 16, in the form of a book review written by Marie Vernon, which appeared in the Living section of the St. Augustine Record, daily newspaper.
Although Midshipman Porter did not call into St. Augustine, the oldest city in the new world was on the front lines of every conflict in its centuries old history. It has known the footsteps of conquerors, conquistadors, pirates, privateers, buccaneers in the era of sail - and is still in the combat zone for cyber hackers, smugglers of dope, contraband and illegal immigrates of many nationalities - friend and foe.
These are early days in the young adventurer's career, but the dastardly practices performed by evil scoundrels were ancient before man set out to explore the seas and conquer the world. Book two in the saga in on the slips, fitting out and eager to be launched. It bears many similarities to current events, despite the passage of time.
Cruelty and greed have no expiration date. But hopefully bravery and heroism will keep it in check.
Book review "Midshipman Porter: In Harm's Way"
Q&A with Jack Owen
Posted: November 16, 2014 - 12:08am
From page one, “Midshipman Porter: In Harms Way” immerses readers in
the era when tall ships and the men who sailed in them played an
integral role during our nation’s infancy. The British have imposed
unreasonable taxes on the American colonies and have blockaded vital
ports up and down the east coast to prevent tax-free smuggling. In a
time when roads were marginal at best and transportation slow, this
presents a severe hardship to the colonists who rely heavily on merchant
vessels, both for transporting goods and as a source of communication.
As further insult, British captains are authorized to seize merchant
vessels and to impress captured sailors into service for the Royal Navy.
When the blockade makes life difficult for his family in Boston, Captain David Porter, commander of a merchant ship, relocates his family to Baltimore, where the port remains open. It is there that David Porter, Jr. spends his childhood, immersed in the city’s rich culture of seamanship. By the time young Davy is grown and ready to put to sea, the War for Independence has ended, but an uneasy peace prevails. Ships plying their trade between Baltimore and the Caribbean Islands are in danger from ships of the Royal Navy as well as French and Spanish privateers.
While historic events form the spine of Owens’ story, it is the details of daily living in that crucial period, both at sea and on land, that create an indelible picture. For instance, the importation of salt from Bermuda, a British colony, is critical to the American colonists and can only be accomplished at great danger to American merchant ships. Battles at sea are described with attention to infinite detail such as the fact that the sailors loading the cannons below decks wore felt slippers and worked behind wetted canvas to prevent stray sparks from igniting the gunpowder. Likewise, readers will experience what it felt like to cling to rigging far above the ship’s heaving deck during a tropical storm.
Owen’s prose is both precise and colorful, as in this description of the procedure when Porter’s ship docks in a Santo Domingo harbor: The bum-boats bearing bananas, plantains and citrus fruits surrounded Eliza before the anchor-scope settled on the sea bed. Naked ebony boys flashed white teeth...holding up fruit in one hand and the appropriate amount of fingers up with the other.
As Midshipman Porter makes his way upward through the ranks, he experiences disasters and moments of jubilation, capture and escape. He serves under captains who are harsh to their crews and others from whom he learns much about the craft of seamanship. In a Philadelphia brothel, he has his first — but not his last — sexual encounter. The vessels on which he sails vary from small coasting merchant ships to sleek privateers to the pride of the newly formed Continental Navy, the Baltimore-built Constellation, launched in 1797.
This novel captures the imagination with its distinctive characters and uniquely intimate access to events and personages that helped to determine our nation’s destiny. It will appeal to those who love a good sea-going tale and to historians who appreciate meticulous research.
Q&A with Jack Owen
Where did you obtain your extensive knowledge of seamanship?
Observation and osmosis of things nautical. I grew up in a seaside resort on the English side of the Channel with an active fishing fleet competing for the same patch of water as weekend sailors. I learned about lines, lies and salty language at an early age. Five years voluntary service in the Royal Navy, starting as a boy at age 16, probably helped, too. As a journalist, investigative crime reporter and boating columnist in south Florida for half a century, plus contributor to National Fisherman, Boating, and Good Old Boat, some of that information stuck.
What resources did you find helpful in researching the history of America’s post-colonial period?
Books and Broadsheets from that period and about the period were invaluable sources of confirmation. Its made much easier, but with less thrill of discovery, with the advent of Google, etc. As a former maritime journalist and antiquarian bookseller, both my Old Book Shop stock in Palm Beach and my own library of Porter specific tomes, helped. Personal visits to some locations, in and out of the service, plus associations with naval families, also worked.
Is the Porter family based on actual persons?
Very much so. Dig into any naval or military action from the Revolution to today, and somewhere a Porter will crop up. I test-read an early chapter to a pod of writers in Gainesville, several years ago. One of the group, an esoteric experimental author, turned out to be a Porter descendant. She had no idea great-great-great-great grandfather was such a sporty lad. Quite took the wind out of her sails.
Are the encounters Midshipman Porter and his family have with various historic figures such as Captain Horatio Nelson, Patrick Henry and the Poe family of Baltimore based on fact?
Some are so, some are near-misses. Back in the day, populations of major cities were pretty cozy. Baltimore was home to 13,503 homeowners in 1790; St. Augustine’s population this year is 13,113 people according to Internet sources. Like-thinking folks are liable to move in the same circles. Merchants, shipowners and politicians socialized within the society they created. Many Porters, historians and biographers have recorded “the facts,” according to them. My excursion into “Faction” adds flesh to the bones and a light in the eyes of historical figures, dates and events.
What is next for Midshipman—now Lieutenant—Porter?
A smashing yarn of tragedy, horror and honor, which began with the capture of USS Philadelphia by Barbary Pirates on the night of Halloween, 1803. Villains and heroes of that era outmatch anything Hollywood screenwriters could invent. The legendary incident, which created the line “to the shores of Tripoli” in the U.S. Marine Corps hymn, has sunk into dry history texts. But the capture and enslavement of 307 American sailors, their 18-month captivity, the germ of a naval academy, the first regime-change warlike overseas action of the fledgling county and the raising of the American flag on foreign soil involved David Porter.
When the blockade makes life difficult for his family in Boston, Captain David Porter, commander of a merchant ship, relocates his family to Baltimore, where the port remains open. It is there that David Porter, Jr. spends his childhood, immersed in the city’s rich culture of seamanship. By the time young Davy is grown and ready to put to sea, the War for Independence has ended, but an uneasy peace prevails. Ships plying their trade between Baltimore and the Caribbean Islands are in danger from ships of the Royal Navy as well as French and Spanish privateers.
While historic events form the spine of Owens’ story, it is the details of daily living in that crucial period, both at sea and on land, that create an indelible picture. For instance, the importation of salt from Bermuda, a British colony, is critical to the American colonists and can only be accomplished at great danger to American merchant ships. Battles at sea are described with attention to infinite detail such as the fact that the sailors loading the cannons below decks wore felt slippers and worked behind wetted canvas to prevent stray sparks from igniting the gunpowder. Likewise, readers will experience what it felt like to cling to rigging far above the ship’s heaving deck during a tropical storm.
Owen’s prose is both precise and colorful, as in this description of the procedure when Porter’s ship docks in a Santo Domingo harbor: The bum-boats bearing bananas, plantains and citrus fruits surrounded Eliza before the anchor-scope settled on the sea bed. Naked ebony boys flashed white teeth...holding up fruit in one hand and the appropriate amount of fingers up with the other.
As Midshipman Porter makes his way upward through the ranks, he experiences disasters and moments of jubilation, capture and escape. He serves under captains who are harsh to their crews and others from whom he learns much about the craft of seamanship. In a Philadelphia brothel, he has his first — but not his last — sexual encounter. The vessels on which he sails vary from small coasting merchant ships to sleek privateers to the pride of the newly formed Continental Navy, the Baltimore-built Constellation, launched in 1797.
This novel captures the imagination with its distinctive characters and uniquely intimate access to events and personages that helped to determine our nation’s destiny. It will appeal to those who love a good sea-going tale and to historians who appreciate meticulous research.
Q&A with Jack Owen
Where did you obtain your extensive knowledge of seamanship?
Observation and osmosis of things nautical. I grew up in a seaside resort on the English side of the Channel with an active fishing fleet competing for the same patch of water as weekend sailors. I learned about lines, lies and salty language at an early age. Five years voluntary service in the Royal Navy, starting as a boy at age 16, probably helped, too. As a journalist, investigative crime reporter and boating columnist in south Florida for half a century, plus contributor to National Fisherman, Boating, and Good Old Boat, some of that information stuck.
What resources did you find helpful in researching the history of America’s post-colonial period?
Books and Broadsheets from that period and about the period were invaluable sources of confirmation. Its made much easier, but with less thrill of discovery, with the advent of Google, etc. As a former maritime journalist and antiquarian bookseller, both my Old Book Shop stock in Palm Beach and my own library of Porter specific tomes, helped. Personal visits to some locations, in and out of the service, plus associations with naval families, also worked.
Is the Porter family based on actual persons?
Very much so. Dig into any naval or military action from the Revolution to today, and somewhere a Porter will crop up. I test-read an early chapter to a pod of writers in Gainesville, several years ago. One of the group, an esoteric experimental author, turned out to be a Porter descendant. She had no idea great-great-great-great grandfather was such a sporty lad. Quite took the wind out of her sails.
Are the encounters Midshipman Porter and his family have with various historic figures such as Captain Horatio Nelson, Patrick Henry and the Poe family of Baltimore based on fact?
Some are so, some are near-misses. Back in the day, populations of major cities were pretty cozy. Baltimore was home to 13,503 homeowners in 1790; St. Augustine’s population this year is 13,113 people according to Internet sources. Like-thinking folks are liable to move in the same circles. Merchants, shipowners and politicians socialized within the society they created. Many Porters, historians and biographers have recorded “the facts,” according to them. My excursion into “Faction” adds flesh to the bones and a light in the eyes of historical figures, dates and events.
What is next for Midshipman—now Lieutenant—Porter?
A smashing yarn of tragedy, horror and honor, which began with the capture of USS Philadelphia by Barbary Pirates on the night of Halloween, 1803. Villains and heroes of that era outmatch anything Hollywood screenwriters could invent. The legendary incident, which created the line “to the shores of Tripoli” in the U.S. Marine Corps hymn, has sunk into dry history texts. But the capture and enslavement of 307 American sailors, their 18-month captivity, the germ of a naval academy, the first regime-change warlike overseas action of the fledgling county and the raising of the American flag on foreign soil involved David Porter.
Sunday, October 12, 2014
Sea Spectres Live On in 'The Jekyll Island Enigma'
Please accept this gift - can be read during the hall-time show - as a teaser to tempt you to read the full, expurgated story...later.
Except
from 'The Jekyll Island Enigma' by Jack Owen
(gift-read between plays)
Bremen
Departs
Konig
wrinkled his nose at the acrid smell of burning oil and cordite
filtering into the grimy, camouflaged car as it approached Lorient.
“This
is worse than my cigar, eh ?” he rubbed sleep from his eyes,
peering at shipyards smoldering from another English bombing raid.
Dockyard workers ignored the car bumpily edging through their midst.
German uniforms and military vehicles were a common sight to battered
and bewildered Frenchmen following the country’s defeat in June,
1940.
Konig
glanced back toward the other passenger, Gerhardt Muni, perched on
the back seat with him. He braced himself when the car swayed to
skirt bomb craters which had turned the road into a perilous
patchwork of holes.
Muni
merely nodded and shrugged, following an established pattern to
Konig’s friendly conversational attempts. Muni only voluntarily
spoke once during the long drive, to protest when Konig lit up a
cigar.
“Is
that necessary ?” Muni asked petulantly, winding down his window.
The draft disturbed his carefully coifed flaxen hair, depositing dust
motes, which he fastidiously flicked off the surface of an
immaculately pressed new navy uniform.
“Yes.”
Konig said curtly. “When you have spent most of the war under
water, breathing in the stench of hot machinery and unwashed bodies,
you seize every opportunity to enjoy the little comforts life has to
offer.”
Muni
coughed delicately into a fresh linen handkerchief extracted, like a
magician, from the sleeve of his uniform jacket. “That may be, but
put it out,” he ordered.
Konig’s
eyes narrowed briefly and a slight tremor flecked his cheek. He drew
a deep breath, slowly shaking his head before he exhaled and tapped
the single gold stripe on Muni’s arm before glancing down at the
two gold rings of command on his own sleeve.
“I
suggest you read up on Naval insignia, and rank, if you’re going to
wear the uniform,” Konig said softly.
Muni’s
mouth opened to reply before he saw Konig’s lopsided smile was not
reflected in his dark eyes. Muni clamped his mouth shut and shifted
to the far end of the seat. Konig took advantage of the hours of
chilled silence to doze, not waking until they reached Lorient.
In
the distance Konig saw the mouth of a tunnel leading to the protected
submarine pens, beyond the gauntlet of civilian road laborers and
dockyard workers.
One
of the French workers casually glanced up from his mundane task of
sizing cobblestones at the curb-edge, closely observing the car’s
occupants when it swept past. He noted their uniforms and rank,
turning his head slowly to follow the direction of Konig’s pointed
finger.
The
submariner was oblivious to the workman’s curiosity.
His
attention was riveted by the sight of three sea-going tugs
maneuvering a badly shelled half-submerged U-boat, into a fortified
basin containing several other battered Boots.
“Mein
Gott, look at that!” Konig cried.
“You
won’t find what you’re looking for there Captain.”
Muni
spoke up from his corner, carefully straightening his double-breasted
jacket to fasten the buttons.
“I
think I can recognize my own boot, Leutnant, even in that scrapheap.
I can’t imagine what dumpkoff left those boots out in the open like
sitting ducks for air-attack.”
Konig
spun around to face Muni who was busy adjusting his high-peaked cap
at a jaunty angle. “You can forget your mission now, I think.”
“I
think not Captain. What you are looking for is not there.” Muni
responded haughtily, adding smugly, “Admiral Canaris will no doubt
be amused at your description of him. He ordered the pens emptied for
my mission.”
“That
wreck is my boat!” Konig, ignoring the comment, thrust a
leather-gloved finger at the submarine being supported, pushed and
towed by the tugs.
“Your
command is in the bunker, safe beneath 15-feet of reinforced concrete
and steel.” Muni curled back his lip in a smiling sneer at the
puzzled look on Konig’s face. “You’ll see.”
Konig
clenched his fist so tightly his knuckles threatened to burst out of
his gloves. Muni represented the power and authority of a man held in
high esteem by Der Fuhrer, and Konig obeyed orders. But that did not
mean he liked it.
The
French workman’s eyes followed the car’s progress until it
reached the tunnel entrance, while his hands automatically maintained
their mechanical task. Beneath the shabbily dressed, unshaven man, a
mind schooled in the minutia of espionage logged the non-incident to
memory for his next intelligence report to England, along with the
damage caused by the air-raid, and number of trucks entering
Lorient’s marine arsenal.
Artificial
light emphasized the strained lines etched on Konig’s face when the
car entered the tunnel. If the wreckage of U-122 was not his to
command, he wondered which of the Type IXD Class boats he had been
assigned to.
While
his brain engaged in matching captains to supply boats, his eyes
narrowed at the sight of the submarine which filled his view. It
looked like a steel anachronism from his youth: a dull-gray fat
cigar-shaped hull with a plumb bow, canoe-stern, and an open catwalk
raised along the length of its upper deck.
Deutschlander, sister-ship to lost Bremen, unloading in New London, Connecticut,1916
“Wh-what
in God’s name...?” He muttered.
“Your
new command, the late Great War blockade runner Bremen.” Muni
indicated with a disdainful hand gesture.
Konig
stared, mouth compressed into a thin tight line, at the ghost of the
legendary merchant submarine Bremen. He vaguely recalled her reported
disappearance with all hands shortly after sailing from Germany in
the summer of 1916.
When
Konig stepped out of the car the spectral ancient hull solidly
blocked his horizon.
He
turned to face Muni, dozens of questions poised to pour out in a
torrent.
“Not
now Captain, please. Your crew and command await.”
Muni
waved his hand imperially.
Konig
squinted against the lights illuminating the cavernous submarine pens
so they were brighter than a sunlit day. The uniformed men assembled
along the dock were his own crew. He swallowed hard, bracing his
shoulders and stepped forward to greet his First-Lieutenant,
Oberleutnant zur See Walter Cremer.
Several
hours later, after the formalities and inspection of crew and boat
were completed, Konig sat in the small wardroom with his second in
command, and Muni. A bottle of schnapps miraculously appeared on the
small table, with three squat stainless-steel thumb-sized tumblers.
Konig
poured with a steady hand while he directed questions at Muni. “Why
was I not warned about this tub? Didn’t think I’d take it, eh ?”
“You
would have been shot if you had refused. You knew too much. Danke!”
Muni matter of factly answered. He grasped his tumbler, raising it in
silent salute and downed its contents in one gulp.
The
others followed his lead.
Konig
refilled the glasses before firing off his next round of questions.
“Where in the world did she come from ?”
He
looked about the cramped cabin with its stark furnishings. Pipes and
valves jammed overhead and along the inner hull.
“Her
maiden voyage through the British blockade was almost her last trip,
“Muni said. “When she approached New York harbor on the surface
she was spotted by a squadron of American frigates. They refused to
accept her as a legitimate Merchant vessel. Bremen’s commander
submerged to escape capture, but was depth-charged. He managed to
escape by leaving a decoy of oil and personal items - including a
lifering with Bremen’s name on it - to fool the Americans.”
Muni
spun his tale in a bored, monosyllabic tone to the two submariners
straining forward to listen.
“Once
Bremen was far enough out in the North Atlantic, off the convoy
routes and away from enemy patrols, she re- surfaced and made a run
for Spain, a less aggressive ‘neutral’ country. Bremen was
presumed lost at sea, and Naval Intelligence used her loss to enlist
the sympathy of pro- German factions in America. Protests against the
brutal and ‘cowardly’ sinking of the unarmed Merchant submarine
proved to be a better propaganda weapon than her survival.” Muni
shrugged, holding his tumbler out again.
Konig
hesitated before pouring again. “Her survival could have been
embarrassing to the High Command, I suppose. So Bremen remained
hidden from sight in Spain for two decades and no one said anything
?”
“It
took a bit of persuasion, and a lot of palm-oil to keep it quiet.”
Muni stroked one hand across the palm of the other.
“And
the crew ?” Cremer, the pudgy, older First Officer, asked.
“They
had a long holiday in German East Africa patrolling Lake Victoria on
an armed steamer. Until a maniac Englishman sunk them with a
home-made bomb mounted on the bow of his piddling little boat, the
‘African Queen’. He, and the English slut with him, perished in
the explosion.” Muni smiled with satisfaction. His death’s-head
insignia signet ring rattled against his tumbler impatiently.
Konig
glanced briefly at Cremer, involuntarily shuddering at the fate of
the Bremen’s crew, before pouring another round of schnapps.
During
the next 48-hours Konig absorbed every facet of the ancient submarine
he could. It was a weird experience to tour a boat presumed ‘dead’
for 25 years. He felt as though he had suddenly been given command of
a salvaged ‘Titanic’.
Teaser
Ends..
Available in paperback or Kindle - you know where...
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Thursday, October 2, 2014
First Time Television Apparance - A Classic Event with Joan Rivers
Sad to hear about the passing of Joan Rivers, a pro who still performed, beyond her prime.
The clips below are TV-stills taken from 'The Joan Rivers Show', recorded in New York, November 16 (my birthday), 1992, which launched my book "Palm Beach Scandals - The First 100 Years". I was flown up there along with Count Jean De La Moussaye, ex-boyfriend of Roxanne Pulitzer, for a show focused on SCANDAL.
It was a classic.
During it, Joan got into a hissy-fit with Jessica Hahn [Google it] - off-set via satellite in California(?), which ended with Joan's riposte: "Well, at least I don't have to wear knee-pads to get invited to parties."
Fade-out, panic behind the scenes, hilarity amongst the audience and tears in California, according to eye-witness and next guest; Zsa Zsa Gabor.
A launch I'll never forget!
RIP Joan, a true showbiz trooper.
[pics clipped from tape of Joan River's Show - forwarded to me later]
Friday, May 9, 2014
A stone in the pond
Far Flung Consequences
Just heard about the death of Canadian writer Farley Mowat, at 95.
RIP/
I'm amazed he lasted so long at the rate he expended energy and intensity, from conservation of the environment to resuscitating boats beyond their sell-by date.
Back in the mid-70's during that Watergate summer, I was on the west-coast weekending in Seattle while working on a Post-Intelligencer Sunday magazine story [African Queen in Oregon - I think] and was weathered in a a girl's parents house (don't ask). That is one rainy city. Found a book with the intriguing title 'The Boat Who Wouldn't Float', inhaled it and wrote Mowat's publisher pal Jack Stewart of McClellend & Stewart - THE Canadian Publishers - querying a coffee-table art book based on Canadian maritime artist Jack L. Gray.
Lot of Jacks here, eh.
I'd met Jack Gray living aboard 'Gypsy Queen' in Palm Beach Marina one season when he was gargling Liebfraumilch by the crate, between trying to finish oil paintings of an East Ironbound dory-man sculling and hauling cod, to be viewed by the caviar-set at The Worth Avenue Gallery .
One sure way to determine if a painting at a gallery-opening was a genuine Jack Gray - just touch it.
That led to my first book-contract, a drive across Canada via the TransCan Highway from Seattle to Lunenburg, months of work, followed by midnight-oil writing/assembling, followed by second wifey's demand for bigger slice of royalty, followed by deep-six of project by publisher.
So, yes, Farley Mowat had more of an impact on me than the average author !
RIP, indeed.
Thursday, May 8, 2014
Combined Talents:
When One + One = ONE
The pen-name of writers Judy Habeck
Weber and Marie Vernon who combined forces to produce a whodunnit
written by Amber Adams, was a pragmatic inspiration.
It stemmed from the reality of the
alphabetical fiction listings by-author in all genres at most
book-shops. Their target readership, “women of a certain age”
will not, and some cannot, get down on hands and knees to scour for
books on the bottom shelf.
Judy Weber explains how she and
co-author Marie Vernon keep from killing each other –
to a roomful of 'Sisters in
Crime' Florida'
A little background.
Judy had a New
York career in Ad-space-sales during the era of liquid lunches and
reality 'Mad Men' in Manhattan's Madison Avenue heyday. She later
edited and wrote for a building trades magazine, based in the
fast-growing South Florida real-estate boom, before retiring onto a
boat at a marina with her hubby. That's when she considered testing
the fictional waters, joined FWA (Florida Writer's Association), won
writing awards, became a judge then Queen of England...(sorry...got
carried away).
Marie's writing career began as a
freelancer with feature-stories in national newspapers Her
non-fiction books included colonial history of Maryland; then
hard-crime tomes co-authored with her late husband forensic
psychologist McCay (Mac) Vernon, about serial killers. Her
fascinating with an extreme fan of Elvis Presley, and that ilk, lead
to the fictional book Graceland. It is currently being adapted
as a stage play.
So, not novices, but neophytes in the
roles they have grown into.And this is how they did it –
without becoming victims in a murder mystery
Amber Adams' creation Day McKelvey, a
lady of a certain age, is a newspaper reporter investigation the
death of a university president who's body is found at the foot of
the 'World's Tallest Cross' (208 feet high) at the Shrine of Our Lady
of La Leche, St. Augustine. The prime suspect is a student she
mentored.
Marie's strength is her
''stick-to-intuitiveness' attitude, which has carried her through six
published books; but she is liable to fall in love with words.
Judy helps keep the storyline on
track.
An example from the Book Two in the
series they are working on; one of the subject/suspects Day McKelvey
interviews, has a parrot. Marie was totally taken with the pretty
polly on a perch who didn't just speak but, was bi-lingual.
Wonderful. But editor-writer Judy gave that colorful distraction, the
bird. He was terminated. The story-line moved forward toward its
objective, bringing a killer to justice.
Judy says she appreciates the
eloquence of Shakespearean verse and soliloquys such as Hamlet's “To
be, or not to be”. But prefers to stick with the 'nuts and bolts'
of constructing stories which will stand up to scrutiny.Her point of
view is, flowery decoration is the icing on the cake.
Marie confessed: “If the house was
on fire, the first thing I'd save would be the thesaurus.”
They barely knew each other when, by
some alchemy following a meeting at FWA they began discussing a joint
venture. They don't live close enough for garden-fence gossip, but
the convenience of social media via email,eliminates a lot of travel.
And bloodshed.
“We've learned to read between the
lines of our messages. If either one of us uses extremely diplomatic
wordage to accept a version the other has written, its pretty sure
they think its terrible,” Judy said.
Separation when either reads a new
draft, eliminates spontaneous outbursts like: “Oh no,” and “I
hate that idea. That's really dumb.”
They agreed on the timeline and
storyline, the foundation of the book during initial kneecap to
kneecap sessions, then submitted progressions for consideration,
work-over, rewrite,inclusion.
Next.
“You have to lose your ego, to
co-operate,” Judy said. Their different personalities, work habits,
strengths, weaknesses, had to adjust to compliment each other without
losing sight of their final target, the reader.
When Judy first attended writer groups
and submitted manuscripts for feedback and criticism, it was an
uncomfortable period of adjustment.
“Every word was my baby. I had to
realize there were alternatives, some of which improved the writing
and story. We will respond, respectably,” she glanced at a smiling
Marie, “to each others suggestions.”
Then added.
“Of course. That was Vol. 1. Who
knows who's going to say 'idiot' first, in Vol. 2 ?”
Ends...
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